Attention Parents of P4 and P5 students!

Are you worried about your child’s failing or stagnant Chinese composition grades?

If so, your child is about to receive the help he truly needs.

Attention Parents of P4 and P5 students.

Are you worried about your child’s failing or stagnant Chinese composition grades?

If so, your child is about to receive the help he truly needs.

Let’s face it. Your child may be doing well in other subjects and Chinese is the one that’s pulling his overall grades down.

As such, he risks scoring a lower aggregate and missing the cut-off point to get into the secondary school of his choice.

Every mark counts in the Chinese Paper. You recognise that composition is the component that’s weighing your child down the most.

Knowing he doesn’t have enough writing practices in school, you send your child for tuition, hoping he will see the light and write better.

Many practices later, he still cannot write well.

What is the issue? He has already written quite a lot!

On top of your frustration, you see your child’s dejected look and you feel sorry for him.

You worry for him and that keeps you up at night and interrupts your work in the day.

Gosh, you are not sure how you can help him anymore.

Yet you can’t give up now.

His PSLE is in a year’s time.

You are running out of time.

If you are facing the above situation, you are not alone.  

After helping over 500 students, we have identified the crux of the problem. It is something that drilling alone cannot solve.

The issue is with the teaching and feedback your child receives for his writing.

Think about this.

He has always heard teachers saying ‘Show not Tell’. Has he been taught how to do that?

He wants to express his ideas but lacks the ability to write them out. Does he have the vocabulary and right sentence construction?

He sees circles in red, question marks and comments in Chinese in his marked composition that he doesn’t even understand. Does the feedback reach him?

If you want him to have all the tools and feedback to score at least 10 MORE MARKS in his writing, take 3 minutes to read this. 

Before I continue, let me introduce myself.

I am Teacher Rosalind.

 

It’s my passion to help students achieve their desired grades in Chinese by guiding them to develop effective language learning strategies and skills.

Over the last 10 years, I’ve taught local and international students in private and school settings.

Besides teaching, I manage a writing portfolio, translating documents and major exhibitions for government and private organisations.

Since 2016, I’ve published 2 Chinese e-books, “7 Secret Chinese Comprehension Answering Techniques Revealed” and “14 Secret Chinese Oral Strategies Revealed” as well as a bilingual phrase book.

Succinct online Chinese Comprehension video series

“Firstly, I’d like to thank you for sharing the 7-day comprehension skills techniques. I found them succinct and effective, thus I encouraged my child to watch them too. She has a weak foundation in MT [Mother Tongue] but is a keen learner. She picked up helpful skills and would have loved to join your class if she had known about you earlier. She found you not only effective, but sincere.

 

Today is her PSLE MT paper. We would like to thank you for sharing a sincere, effective clip.”

Cynthia

Mother of a P6 student (2016)

Having held numerous Chinese writing workshops, I’ve seen the transformation that my students have undergone just by applying one or two techniques out of the ten techniques that I’ve taught them.

Before – One-line static introduction

After – Four-line dynamic introduction

Before – Skimpy narration of event

After – Detailed narration of event

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So how can your child improve his Chinese composition?

To achieve a transformation, he needs to:

Be exposed to good writing and understand essential writing techniques

Know why he s writing and why he should experiment with the writing techniques taught

 Know what and how to apply the writing techniques taught and get consistent feedback

Where are you going to find a comprehensive Chinese Composition Writing Programme that addresses all these?

The answer lies in My A* Chinese Writing Toolbox!

Oh, what’s that?

It’s a self-paced online programme with teaching videos that show your child the writing techniques he needs to master. He will also receive feedback on his Chinese compositions to ensure that he applies what is taught.

 

Here’s what your child will learn from My A* Chinese Writing Toolbox:

 

 ✓ Appreciate why it is important to develop the specific part of a story that will capture the attention of examiners

 ✓ Know which part of a story deserves special attention and expansion so that he will score in his content (this is what separates an A grade writing from the rest)

 ✓ Start and end his story appropriately with a bang without boring the examiners with cliches that have lost their effect

 ✓ Witness how we show and not tell using the 6 senses and other literary techniques so that while others are memorising paragraphs of inauthentic phrases, he would be creating simple but effective phrases to express his thoughts even if he doesn’t have a wide range of vocabulary

 ✓ Learn how to use specific words to express his thoughts clearly, leaving examiners with no choice but to add credit to his language

So, how do I join My A* Chinese Writing Toolbox?

There is only one step:

Choose one of these two packages and get access to this online programme immediately.

Enrollment will close on 23 August 2019 or when we enroll 20 students so don’t miss it!

Sign up before 23 Aug 2019

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Basic Package 

You will receive:

✓ Immediate lifetime access to 10 video lessons detailing content and language writing strategies and techniques. See a 10-mark jump in grade as your child applies one or two techniques!

✓ A full-coloured 114-page workbook with practices and suggested writing samples that accompany the video lessons. This will be delivered to your doorstep within 1 week.

✓ Comprehensive feedback on 6 Chinese compositions. Besides correcting his errors, we will show your child how to tweak his writing.

Bonuses (worth more than $297)

 Bilingual Phrasebook with 630 short phrases describing emotions from A to Z. Not only can your child refer to it for his Chinese composition, but also he can use it for his English composition! Our students have been using this and have seen a tremendous improvement in the way they describe events.

✓ My Chinese Writing Library updated periodically with additional writing resources that provide advanced writing tips for your child to model after.

All these worth more than $786 in the Basic Package are now available to you at only $59/mth for a period of 6 months!

Save $54 if you choose a one-time payment of $300.

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Platinum Package 

✓ Immediate lifetime access to 10 video lessons detailing content and language writing strategies and techniques. See a 10-mark jump in grade as your child applies one or two techniques!

✓ A full-coloured 114-page workbook with practices and suggested writing samples that accompany the video lessons. This will be delivered to your doorstep within 1 week.

✓ Comprehensive feedback on 12 Chinese compositions. Besides correcting his errors, we will show your child how to tweak his writing.

 

Bonuses (worth more than $379)

 Bilingual Phrasebook with 630 short phrases describing emotions from A to Z. Not only can your child refer to it for his Chinese composition, but also he can use it for his English composition! Our students have been using this and have seen a tremendous improvement in the way they describe events.

✓ My Chinese Writing Library updated periodically with additional writing resources that provide advanced writing tips for your child to model after.

Incubated, an in-house publication with a compilation of English and Chinese compositions written by TPI students. Your child will have an idea of the level of writing that is achievable.

 7 Secret Chinese Comprehension Answering Techniques Revealedvideos to level up your child’s Chinese comprehension besides his writing.

✓ 14 Secret Chinese Oral Strategies Revealed” so that your child will no longer be speechless during Chinese oral.

 

All these worth more than $968 in the Platinum Package are available to you at only $49/mth for a period of 12 months!

Save $88 if you choose a one-time payment of $500

What’s more, there is no risk for you!

Upon signing up for either package, you will have access to all the videos. You have a 60-day money-back guarantee if you find that it doesn’t benefit your child.

Enrollment will close on 23 August 2019 or when we enroll 20 students so don’t miss it!

Sign up before 23 Aug 2019

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Hmm but my child already has tuition…

Your child can just watch the videos anytime without pressure or the hassle of travelling to tuition centres! If he already has tuition, this would also complement his learning.   

Imagine your child understanding the principles behind making changes to his writing and knowing how to change his writing from the teaching and feedback. This constant exposure to specific tips is a surefire way to help him improve his composition writing by at least 10 marks.

Really?

Let’s say your child is now getting 20 marks for his writing. Imagine him improving just 5 marks each for content and language. With both the content and language aspects of writing covered in these reviews, it is not difficult to attain 30/40 anymore!

Join My A* Chinese Writing Toolbox and your child will learn exactly HOW to develop the content and beautify his language in composition writing!

Still thinking?

You might be thinking, “Does this work?”

Yes! In fact, studies have shown that students retain their learning better with videos that stimulate their visual hearing and touch senses. Out of all the information transmitted to the brain, 90% is visual, and visuals are processed 60,000 times faster in the brain than plain text. Hence visual education tools such as videos can improve students’ information retention.

If your child is not keen on reading, at least give him some input that will expose him to some ideas and help him gain insights. Watching videos gets your child started. Over time, he will gain substantial input that translates to his writing.

Rather than seeing your child watch Youtube videos that are not properly curated, why not give him something he enjoys and can learn from at the same time?

Writing skills takes some time to develop. Start now before it’s too late. 

Join My A* Chinese Writing Toolbox today!

Sign up before 23 Aug 2019

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Get the Basic Package worth $786 at only $59/mth for a period of 6 months!

Get the Platinum Package worth $968 at only $49/mth for a period of 12 months!

 

Questions? Reach out to us at +65 8788 0567 or learnmore@theprimaryincubator.com.

 

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From C5 to B3 in Eng O Level within 3 months

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From D7 to B3 in Eng O Level within 8 months

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This testimonial was particularly encouraging to us because it really hit home emotionally. So often, we see parents who are tired and worn out. 

I came out of the talk feeling so enthusiastic to be a mum again! I tried their method the very first thing I woke up on my son, and it worked immediately!!!!!

If you're feeling exhausted about having to deal with your child, and feeling helpless because you don't know what to do, then our parenting workshop is definitely going to help you. 

Don't believe what we say! Read the testimonials for yourself!

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Practical Parenting Techniques That Work Immediately!

What happened here was that the parent had promised the child that he could get ice cream after the consultation, however, the ice cream shop had closed. No matter how much the mother tried to explain, the child kept on insisting that he wanted ice cream, even during dinner. Because it was the last class of the day, our teacher, Rosalind, also joined the family. 

Rosalind noticed the child was still indignant about the ice cream and simply used the very technique that we teach in our workshop. As you can see from the testimonial, the child stopped asking for ice cream immediately.

The parent, being amazed and how quickly this technique works, used it again the following day to help to calm her child before his taekwondo exam. 

Praise the Lord! 😀

High Learning Retention Through Fun Language Activities

Comprehensive Comments That Add Depth To Composition Writing

Insightful and Interactive Discussions

Real Time Support For Parents Who Attended Our Parenting Workshop

This happened after our holiday programme, where a student only signed up for half a day but insisted that she wanted to stay on for more. Her mother had discussed this with her the previous night and did not want to give in to this particular request. 

We reminded the parent of what she had learnt during the parenting workshop (Hint: You must be feeling...) and the parent implemented this amazing technique right away. 

15 minutes later, everything was solved. 

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